Rhyme Scene on Classic Poem

 The Sun Rising (1633)

by John Donne

 Busy old fool, unruly sun,

               Why dost thou thus,

Through windows, and through curtains call on us?

Must to thy motions lovers' seasons run?

               Saucy pedantic wretch, go chide

               Late school boys and sour prentices,

         Go tell court huntsmen that the king will ride,

         Call country ants to harvest offices,

Love, all alike, no season knows nor clime,

Nor hours, days, months, which are the rags of time.

               Thy beams, so reverend and strong

               Why shouldst thou think?

I could eclipse and cloud them with a wink,

But that I would not lose her sight so long;

               If her eyes have not blinded thine,

               Look, and tomorrow late, tell me,

         Whether both th' Indias of spice and mine

         Be where thou leftst them, or lie here with me.

Ask for those kings whom thou saw'st yesterday,

And thou shalt hear, All here in one bed lay.

               She's all states, and all princes, I,

               Nothing else is.

Princes do but play us; compared to this,

All honor's mimic, all wealth alchemy.

               Thou, sun, art half as happy as we,

               In that the world's contracted thus.

         Thine age asks ease, and since thy duties be

         To warm the world, that's done in warming us.

Shine here to us, and thou art everywhere;

This bed thy center is, these walls, thy sphere.

Analysis:

1. Dalam Stanza 1 terdapat rima peluk yang dapat dilihat dari kata sun, thus, us, dan run yang membentuk pola ABBA. Selain itu terdapat juga rima silang yang dapat dilihat dari kata chide, prentices, ride, dan offices yang membentuk pola ABAB. Terakhir terdapat rima terus yang dapat dilihat dari kata clime dan time yang membentuk pola AA

2. Dalam Stanza 2  terdapat rima peluk yang dapat dilihat dari kata strong, think, wink, long yang membentuk pola ABBA. Terdapat juga rima silang pada kata thine, me, mine, me yang membentuk pola ABAB. Ada juga rima terus pada kata yesterday dan lay yang membentuk pola AA

3. Dalam Stanza 3 terdapat rima patah yang dapat dilihat dari kata is, this, dan alchemy yang membentuk pola AAB. Terakhir terdapat rima pasang yang dapat dilihat dari kata thus, us, everywhere, dan sphere yang membentuk pola AABB